For the upcoming pitch to Nancy Spears, I've gone back and drawn these two images to show Veil's likability some more. Some people had trouble seeing his appeal in our practice pitches because I didn't draw him very sympathetic this quarter, for some reason!
Jess has said that we ride a fine line with Veil when pitching since one of the points of his character is that he IS unlikeable at first, being aloof, snarky, uptight, scary-looking,etc. However, once you really get to know him, you see he's actually a pretty good guy.
I'm still unsure about this one.
but either case here's the rough sketch, in case anyone finds this kind of thing ineteresting!